{"id":30671,"date":"2021-03-03T07:00:29","date_gmt":"2021-03-03T12:00:29","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/sharefaithblog.wpengine.com\/?p=30671"},"modified":"2021-03-12T13:58:29","modified_gmt":"2021-03-12T18:58:29","slug":"5-tips-for-writing-engaging-church-emails","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.sharefaith.com\/blog\/2021\/03\/5-tips-for-writing-engaging-church-emails\/","title":{"rendered":"5 Tips for Writing Engaging Church Emails"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><em>Stock Photo by @RyanL via Twenty20<\/em><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Good <a href=\"https:\/\/www.sharefaith.com\/blog\/2021\/01\/5-ways-church-leaders-can-improve-communication\/\">communication is critical<\/a> for churches, and that extends to every channel they use to speak to members. Church leaders should always be looking for ways to fine-tune their messaging and ensure that every potential touchpoint is being used efficiently.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Here are five quick tips for writing emails that will connect with your audience.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">1. Start with a clear subject line<\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">There\u2019s plenty of space in your emails to be fun and cheeky, but the subject line isn\u2019t the place. You want your subject lines to be clear and informative. And they should also be concise, as the majority of emails are opened on mobile devices, where screen space is at a premium. You should shoot for communicating the gist of the email in about 40 characters, or 6 to 7 words. Aim for short and to the point. Being \u201cboring\u201d is better than being unclear.<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">2. Use people\u2019s names<\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Most mass email tools allow you to insert recipients\u2019 names into the email greeting automatically, but some churches don\u2019t use them. Instead, they write a general salutation or don\u2019t start with any greeting at all. <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><br \/>\n<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><br \/>\n<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Personalizing your greeting is the right practice, and people want to feel like you\u2019re speaking directly to them. This is particularly important for church audiences, where you want to encourage two-way conversation and keep recipients from feeling like a nameless cog.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">3. Send them from a real person<\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Not only do you want to end your email with a sign-off from the pastor or some other person, but you want to make sure that person is also represented in the reply-to email address and *FROM* field.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">People engage better in correspondence from an actual person, and when your email comes from one,\u00a0 your open rates will improve. When people see an organization\u2019s email, they don\u2019t assume it\u2019s significant to them personally.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">With this in mind, try and write your emails as if it\u2019s a one-on-one discussion instead of a mass conversation with everyone.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">4. Vary the way you use your emails<\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Email is an excellent tool for reminding people about events and other important information. But if that\u2019s all you use it for, people will start to tune it out. The minute people start thinking, \u201cI saw this in the bulletin,\u201d your open rates will begin to plummet.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Think of your email as a tool for increasing connection. Share testimonies, ask for prayer requests, announce exciting news, and share devotional thoughts. You can even share cool stuff you\u2019ve discovered (<a href=\"https:\/\/www.sharefaith.com\/blog\/2021\/01\/20-thought-provoking-bible-verses-about-worship\/\">like this post on worship!<\/a>). Varying how you use this channel will make people anticipate your emails more.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">5. Focus on one key point<\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Consider how you read an email. If you\u2019re like most people, you scan it looking for pertinent information so you can move on. This is why it\u2019s a good idea to keep your emails focused on one specific thing you want to communicate. If you have a variety of messages, people will miss most of them. Remember: email doesn\u2019t have to be (nor should it be) a digital bulletin.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Pro-tip: Adding a P.S. to your emails is a way to ensure people get the main point. Studies have shown that <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.omnisend.com\/blog\/p-s-marketing-emails\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">79% of email openers<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> read the postscript!\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<h2><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Get the right graphics for your online platforms<\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">You need quality images for social media posts and some of your emails. Save your staff tons of time hunting around online for the right copyright-free images: Sharefaith has more than 90,000 <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.sharefaith.com\/category\/church-graphics.html\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">church graphics<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> for every situation.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Start a <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.sharefaith.com\/feature\/sharefaith-free-trial.html\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">free trial<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, and then check out a media membership or the <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.sharefaith.com\/faith\/joinNow.do\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Sharefaith Suite<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> subscription that comes packed with all your digital resources for one low monthly price.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<h3>Free eBook<\/h3>\n<p><em>Thinking about updating your church website? We can help! Download the free eBook, <a href=\"https:\/\/hello.sharefaith.com\/2021-ten-signs-its-time-to-redesign\">\u201c10 Signs It&#8217;s Time to Redesign Your Church Website: Transforming Your Website Into a Visitor Magnet\u201d<\/a> now.<\/em><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Stock Photo by @RyanL via Twenty20 Good communication is critical for churches, and that extends to every channel they use to speak to members. 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